You have some good work on there, but I would chop that thing down to only your best stuff. Right now there are a lot of dead shots in there that could be cut out, which would make your best work look better. Also, open with your best stuff, if you're using this professionally, most people won't make it past the first thirty seconds of your reel so you want the goods there.
I would also shorten up the intro and drop all the preset uses of Shine and Starglow.
Haha, how does one get Audioslave and Spiderbait confused?
EIther way, it's some good stuff there. You have a really good mix of stuff in there. Kept me interested - which is the ultimate goal. After seeing the opening I was thinking it was going to be an Andrew Kramer remake - but you really surprised me when the reel kicked into gear.