Cinematography Reel Winter 08

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Dli151

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This is a compilation of things I have been shooting while at school I graduate in the Spring. Please tell me what you think, and what you don't like, and please be brutal.... not to brutal, but definitely leave me a message an tell me what you think.

Cinematography Reel Winter 08
 
Hey Denair,
There's a lot of good stuff, but I'm going to be brutal. : )

Too long, and there's some not-so-awesome work you should cut.

I think you're reel would be a lot better if you:

- Got rid of the crooked name at the beginning, and the odd texture.
- Start your reel with the woman at the lake shore, all the shots before that I'd cut.
- Cut the candle shots
- Cut the girl eating breakfast, and a few other shots
- Cut the flying the kite shot
- Get rid off all the things you can do listed at the end.

I'd also tighten up the edit, and maybe find some faster music. The music worked, but I'm wondering if it could be better.

Like I said before, you got some great stuff, I'd just like to see only the best stuff, and I think it took almost a minute before I saw a shot I liked.

Hope that's not too brutal, you have a lot of rad shots.

- Greg
 
Hey greg thx for you response I had a feeling that its to longs and i will go through and chop some things out, only leaving in my best stuff, but what other shots do you think should get the boot? cause I'm not really and editor. but what where the other things that bothered you?
 
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hey thx im going to clean i up probally down to like 1:30 or 2:00 then put it back up in like a week or so
 
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