Critique what I have so far for my shortfilm...

Moonlitnite,

Took me a while to see the link as well, I was expecting something bigger, but if you scroll down you will see "Save file to your PC" at the bottom.

I have downloaded the script and will try and get back to this tonight to comment.

Chris
 
Well, story is okay! I didn't really have trouble picturing how it would look and all, but
It just felt like the cool/exiting part wasn't anywhere to be seen - but perhaps it starts when I stopped reading, so just continue, it seems pretty good to me!

Sorry I can't give you any better critique - don't really read alot of drafts.
 
CherryTime said:
Well, story is okay! I didn't really have trouble picturing how it would look and all, but
It just felt like the cool/exiting part wasn't anywhere to be seen - but perhaps it starts when I stopped reading, so just continue, it seems pretty good to me!

Sorry I can't give you any better critique - don't really read alot of drafts.
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Cool/exiting part? Not sure what you mean?

Nm, I now know you meant to say "exciting." I read your reply first thing in the morning. What page did you read up to?
 
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