Tell a story once sentence at a time.

what the hell. how did I just show up at the end. And why am I chanting in some eskimo tongue? And why didnt Penuin die when I shot him. Just to recap there were a bunch of DVXusers that had a good time and George Lucas and I got killed. What a story. Last time I keep skipping over a thread... You just wait til I come back from the dead in the sequel penguin...
 
what the hell. how did I just show up at the end. And why am I chanting in some eskimo tongue? And why didnt Penuin die when I shot him. Just to recap there were a bunch of DVXusers that had a good time and George Lucas and I got killed. What a story. Last time I keep skipping over a thread... You just wait til I come back from the dead in the sequel penguin...

Hey! I didn't write in the part about me killing you. That was Anhar's genius! :)
 
Nick, got it, thanks.

Its a testament to why writers are called writers, and why the rest of us are not. After reading x number of novels over my lifetime and then having to try and read this, well, let's just call it a keepsake and leave it at that.

:beer:
 
CP, how long did that take!

Its worth a good chuckle, reading it now, thanks for uploading

I don't remember, I did it so long ago. Someone asked, I said I would do it, so I did. I just went through and copied each post, the only thing I edited was punctuation to make it transition somewhat like a real story.

Nick, got it, thanks.

Its a testament to why writers are called writers, and why the rest of us are not. After reading x number of novels over my lifetime and then having to try and read this, well, let's just call it a keepsake and leave it at that.

:beer:

Definitely not a masterpiece, but remember, it was written impromptu by several different authors, all with their own ideas and agendas. :grin:

EDIT: I just reread it. :D I like how the tense changes, the location changes, the POV changes. I also enjoy the many discrepancies in the plot. :)
 
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