Please Review: Ireti's Freedom (Short Romance Drama)

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seunosewa

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A pretty young woman invites an old male admirer to be with her in a private guest house as she awaits news of an unwanted pregnancy. She conveniently forgets to tell him that she is married.


http://pc.celtx.com/res/1kEqvojZWTHA <<updated>>

I know it's a bit rough but I need your reviews before I can determine how to proceed. The short story is set in Lagos, Nigeria. Thanks!
 
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Hi I read it. It's not bad. I acutally like the Waiter's character the most....Something is missing about her character....but I can't put my finger on it....something about her dialogue.....
 
I remember reading one of the scripts you'd posted earlier, and I was genuinely captivated by it. I don't have time to read it right now, but will for certain later.
 
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