my first attempt of a film look

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before you watch this video, please bear in mind that this is my first attempt at a film look video. also, the quality isn't the greatest due to the address i uploaded it to

I'm filming for my dad's friends wedding in December and I'm just in the process of making a few minuets introduction just for the build up of it all.

One last thing, I'm only messing around with some of my footages so it would be nice if i could have some of your opinions to make it look better.

thank you very much

martin

http://s93.photobucket.com/player.s...l55/martin096/Introduction.flv&fs=1&os=1&ap=1
 
One thing, I think that the film grain and scratches are an annoying novelty 9 out of 10 times. Once in a while you'll get realistic scratching that adds to the aesthetic of the film rather than looking hokey. With such great looking video afterwards, the rendered scratches take away from the overall product.

My .02
 
IMO, kinda depressing music for a wedding... its not sad music, but it sounds like something that'd be played for a video at a wake.
 
The shots would be cleaner if they were not hand held. I like looking up dolly shots, which it looks like you were going for in the trees. I would pull back on that to give a wide view. Dolly close up shots are dizzying.

Composition is good
 
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