Okay, check out some of my Motion Graphics Work

Ease on the camera moves/animation. Not a big fan of the font selection, and the last cut to the end logo reveal doesn't feel right. I think the whole thing needs to be more fluid to go with the style of the write on effect you got going. The stopping and starting breaks the rhythym of the piece and there is no reason why it should. Think of why you need the frame to compeletly stop like. Every movement needs to be motivated.

It's a good start, but when it comes to motion there is a lot involved. You have to consider all the things you normally would for a still: color, composition, balance, etc, then you have to consider that over time.
 
Love the concept. Great colors. I agree with smoothing everything out. It should just flow seemlessly.
Brian
 
Hey Brian I just checked out your website. Nice work. If you ever have any small work maybe you could remember my name :o)
Daniel K Johnson
 
You are correct that is a Final Cut Studio template, but I used neither after effects or motion to make this. I did this all in FCP which was very painful let me tell you. I was wondering if anyone would notice? As soon as I get a few higher end gigs I plan on purchasing the Adobe Production studio so I may enjoy ae and ps! But, alas I will have to make due with Final Cut Studio for now. Since I am running on a mac mini I can't even use Motion 2 which is a bummer.
 
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You are correct that is a Final Cut Studio template, but I used neither after effects or motion to make this. I did this all in FCP which was very painful let me tell you. I was wondering if anyone would notice?

That would definately explain the smoothing issues.

@Brian(MotionFX) do you have a reel up anywhere?
 
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