What is best length for a doc on making a film?

David_M_Payne

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Hi guys. What is best length for a doc on making a film? As some of you know I've been working on a film titled Holy War and I've come to a wall that I can't get over with my current finances. In short I tried to use the Kevin Smith "Clerks" model to film my film, but my tale is much more complicated, and has more actors and locations. The reality I've run into is that this is a real movie, not a few guys hanging around a one location setting and depending on great dialog to carry it as Kevin did in Clerks. The story is complicated, there are several locations and I need to use a lot more actors than were in Clerks. I have all of the equipment I need from two HVX200's, lights, mics etc all the way to computers and editing programs. (An apple G5 Quad and FCP studio.)
But the reality is I need to do this film much like they do a Hollywood film, not a backyard production with a handy cam. The problem I can't get past is trying to get actors and crew, some of who are willing to donate their time and some who I'm paying to all get their schedules to sync. It's like trying to herd cats and I need some real money to do a proper film schedule and finish the film.
Lacking that money I'm doing a documentary on the film called "Making Holy War". My plan is to use some of the footage we already have with a new scene shot just for the documentary that is quite funny and is a great lead into the documentary. I've chosen this route for two reasons.
1. I hope to have a finished project that includes the basic story as told by me. In effect I'm doing what they call "the pitch" for the movie and showing any prospective viewers that we have a great tale to tell and the equipment to tell it, our motivations for doing this particular film, and our need for some financial help to get it done. We plan to talk a bit about all the equipment out there that we are using for the film, a sort of how to shoot a film with all the stuff that is out there these days that only film studios had in days past. We are also going to show a few scenes we already have, some good, some bad and talk about what went right and what went wrong in the filming. In short I'm using the documentary to look for investors and show them some of our abilities to actually do this film.
2. The second reason is to perhaps sell the documentary itself and use that money to finish the film.

But what is the best length to do this? A half hour? An Hour? We can do either and I'm not sure of the right length that would have some commercial potential. I want to give enough info to whet the prospective appetites of potential investors, but I don't want to make it too long, or not long enough to be commercially viable. Any of you have any ideas on this length issue? Thanks.

David
 
David,

What really matters is how much compelling material you have. I wouldn't worry too much at this point about how long the finished project should be. Start making selects, editing great scenes together and see how it's going.

A really tight, funny 20 minute short might have some potential for getting into film festivals and also get you some investor attention for the longer project. My hunch that anything much longer than that might start to feel indulgent. Best to leave 'em wanting more. But I haven't seen your footage.

Check out a recent documentary called "Audience of One." It has a very similar story to the one you want to tell in your doc. "Michael Jacobs' documentary follows Pentecostal Pastor Richard Gazowsky as he attempts to make an epic science-fiction film after he receives a message from God." There's an NPR story here:

http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=8972583

Good luck!
Garret
 
David,

What really matters is how much compelling material you have. I wouldn't worry too much at this point about how long the finished project should be. Start making selects, editing great scenes together and see how it's going.

A really tight, funny 20 minute short might have some potential for getting into film festivals and also get you some investor attention for the longer project. My hunch that anything much longer than that might start to feel indulgent. Best to leave 'em wanting more. But I haven't seen your footage.

Check out a recent documentary called "Audience of One." It has a very similar story to the one you want to tell in your doc. "Michael Jacobs' documentary follows Pentecostal Pastor Richard Gazowsky as he attempts to make an epic science-fiction film after he receives a message from God." There's an NPR story here:

http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=8972583

Good luck!
Garret

Thanks and funny you would give me a link to a film about a Pentecostal preacher, as my film in its serious mode looks at how the god/religion biz is misused by so many to gain evil results, see 9/11 for the latest example. Of course that is a small part of the film, as it is Scifi with a bit of horror, humor, sex and a mass murderer on the loose. My goal is to do a film that is this generations "Mash", a funny film with a serious message about the futility of wars, especially Holy Wars.

On another note we were thinking that a half hour would be a good length, 24 min actually so that if it got picked up by a television network it would fit their time needs counting ads. Also we plan to have me interviewing a couple of the actors as well as myself in a double role about the film. (It's amazing that it is so easy to place the same person in two places in the same scene. Thank you FCP studio.) I don't want to come across as self indulgent but I do want to explore a bit of my personal motivation for doing the film, both from an artistic sense as well as some of my personal motivation which is tied to Iraq and my own experiences in Vietnam and some of the parallels I see there.

Thanks for the feedback and it reinforces the half hour or so time frame, which is probably best.

David
 
Whatever work for your movie.

That said, for TV distribution 95% of possible partners will ask for '1 hour' cut. Meaning anything from 56 to 42 minutes depending on the deal.
For theatrical or DVD it should be at least around 90 minutes.

But read again the first line before you consider any other case.
 
Whatever work for your movie.

That said, for TV distribution 95% of possible partners will ask for '1 hour' cut. Meaning anything from 56 to 42 minutes depending on the deal.
For theatrical or DVD it should be at least around 90 minutes.

But read again the first line before you consider any other case.

Well we will shoot it and edit it for interesting content, and if that is more than an half hour we will go for an hour. Time will tell on this point. Thanks for the input Alex.

David
 
It should be the length of a woman's skirt: Short enough to be interesting, but long enough to cover the subject.
 
It should be the length of a woman's skirt: Short enough to be interesting, but long enough to cover the subject.

Of course that has to take in the shape of the woman involved. For some hot women it can't be short enough, and for other women not so hot or in shape, it can't be long enough. :laugh:
As this doc is meant to feature the film, I think shorter may be better in this instance.


David
 
David I started to respond to your webpage then realized the miles between us,,, too bad I was hoping to volunteer my help in your film.

Good luck with it
joe
 
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