Please, Critique My Demo Reel

[They Live]

This isn't technically my demo reel, but rather my demo reel montage that plays at the beginning of my demo reel DVD. I posted this in the screen grabs forum, but haven't gotten as many responses as I hoped so thought I'd post it here too. It's about 2 minutes long. Thanks for your time.

NOTE: My first time out with compression. I found that the H.264 codec washed the video out some, but it's not too bad.

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http://dvx-ben.dvxdata.com/DVX-BenDemoReel1.mov

Ben

 

[Cynic821]

I enjoyed the music and the editing, but i wasnt very impressed by the videos used in it itself. As a demo reel, i think its good in the sense its a well done reel, but i think you need more professional looking content to put in it. I know what im trying to say but difficult to say it the way i want to.

Anyways, i think maybe a little shorter, and some flashier graphics for the text would be nice.

Reminds me to put one together and hopefully ill get honest reviews too.

 

[They Live]

Cynic, appreciate it. Points well taken. I'm hoping this reel will open up some oppurtunities to get more professional content done.