New business card, Opinions please

I like the originals with the "chick"
I like the ones with the sky, but agree that they are probably too busy. The bottom set of the originals.... The chick and no sky would be my vote. Elegant, simple, clean, precise, to the point, etc., etc.

Jason
 
In my opinion, I too feel there needs to be something else to break the "template" look. I might be too cliche, but a strip of film might not be a bad idea, photographers and cinematographers both use film (well a lot of them), just an idea. I like the general layout of everything and the sizes of your text also are very well thought out. Cheers.
 
my vote is for the revised "sky" w/o the silouhetted woman. imo, you solved the "busy-ness" problem by heavily reducing the contrast in the sky image.
 
Be sure to keep the text at the bottom inside the safe zone, if it stays there it looks like it might get cut off. just checkin
 
Yeah, watch your bleeds.

I have to say that the top left original is still far and away my favorite. It's simple, stylish, elegant, but has a bit of personality to it. The cloud image simply clutters everything up too much, and losing the girl makes the card feel entirely too generic.

However, I agree with the comment about the earpiece or whatever it is she has. It's distracting/confusing. And more importantly, by putting an image of a person on your card, you most definitely are suggesting that you ARE that person. Something important to consider. Still, I don't think it works without her (or *something*) there.
 
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