critique new web site and music video

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Vincent Pascoe

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so trying to finish up on Ver 1 of website...i think I'd like to remove the comercail and replace it with...

http://www.dontpanik.tv/Clients/Greg/Monster_v6.mov


also look at this music video I shot

http://www.meszlermedia.com/vp/320_240_h264_no_more_pain.mov

http://www.meszlermedia.com/vp/320_240_h264_no_more_pain.wmv

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmtO4h8tGPU

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=1310484679

please feel free to tell me what you think...

and leave coments (says the myspace freak in me)

www.myspace.com/vincentpascoe

www.vincentpascoe.com

VP
 
music Video super 16mm

demo reel maily DVX with a little 16mm

Feature trailer HVX

timelapse and comercail HVX

monster spec comercail 35mm

vp
 
Great looking shots you got there, Vincenct. To be honest, though, the website could really use a professional touch. It just seems very "simple", and not very interesting at all. Also, I'm on a mac, and the WMV's you have posted play through my quicktime via "flip4mac". Well, when they open in QT, they are named whatever you named them on your computer, and that's what it reads near the top of the player ("timelapse_3_dvd_good"; "YT_for_Myspace", etc.). Change the names.

One more thing... it's much more "user friendly" if the links open to a new window, instead of just being sent there, and then having to press the "back" button to get back to the home page. I'd recomend either giving a "home" button on each page, or better yet, just have the pages open in a new window.

Just trying to help out a bit ;)

-brown
 
thanks good points...my web guy Chris Mezler made the page...and yes maybee its to simple.... I'm thinking adding Bio not shure and re doing reseme....



VP
 
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