inspire84
Well-known member
New intro for a hip hop tv show called MAD CIPHAS. Check it out!
www.noahshulman.com/TVSHOWINTRO.mov
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www.noahshulman.com/TVSHOWINTRO.mov
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Hip Hop Tv Show Intro!!!!!!!
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LostInSound
Active member
That was nice, a bit long though, how long did it take you :thumbup: to complete?
kai
After FX Guru
Not to shabby man. Is this for a local show I'm assuming?
Some constructive criticism:
Cut the length. Most opens are :30 tops. (15-20 seconds of action and build with a 5 second logo resolve at the end.)
Lose some plugins. A common mistake many people just starting out make is go for the plugins way too often. This includes Glints and radio wave.
There doesn't seem to be a cohesive "theme" throughout the piece. IE, there's a space theme, an urban grit theme, a paper theme, a cutout theme, etc. It would help solidify the piece if you picked one and really rocked one vs many.
I'd play with some bias on your camera moves. Some easy ease will go a long way here.
Typography: There are quite a few different typefaces, and treatments of each. I'd pick one and really design the open well around that (see theme above)
Just a few quick thoughts, and as always, just my 2cents...
Some constructive criticism:
Cut the length. Most opens are :30 tops. (15-20 seconds of action and build with a 5 second logo resolve at the end.)
Lose some plugins. A common mistake many people just starting out make is go for the plugins way too often. This includes Glints and radio wave.
There doesn't seem to be a cohesive "theme" throughout the piece. IE, there's a space theme, an urban grit theme, a paper theme, a cutout theme, etc. It would help solidify the piece if you picked one and really rocked one vs many.
I'd play with some bias on your camera moves. Some easy ease will go a long way here.
Typography: There are quite a few different typefaces, and treatments of each. I'd pick one and really design the open well around that (see theme above)
Just a few quick thoughts, and as always, just my 2cents...
Steve_Arm
Well-known member
I liked Sapphire Glint, however ithe whole anim is too much. Watching it, it seems like you put
everything you know in there! In a good way. If it could sum up all these cool ideas in 25 secs it would be outstanding. It still is very wow but too much, at least for me. What do you think watching it?
everything you know in there! In a good way. If it could sum up all these cool ideas in 25 secs it would be outstanding. It still is very wow but too much, at least for me. What do you think watching it?