Film I Made In N.O.

you "can't really tell", as in, you don't want to ruin the twist? or like me, you "can't really tell" because you have no idea what the f*ck was going on?
 
I didnt like that. I couldnt see a thing.

But again, thank you for taking the time to make something. I just sit around all day.
 
pacing. was. way. too. slow. Especially for the lackluster "payoff."

Speed it up! This seemed like a 1 - 1.5 minute short stretched to 5 minutes for no good reason. Use some lights next time, too. This seemed like a very simple, straightforward concept. Use that to your advantage - make a short, simple, taut piece with minimal "noirish" lighting (not NO lighting beside practicals).
 
yeah i know my friend had never done film making so its really more of a fun random thing that we/I made. And yeah it does need lighting but its not something big anyways.
 
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