Hey, would love some feedback on some of my short films.

[arhartman]

hey guys.
I'm a young filmmaker and I posted a couple of my shorts on youtube not to long ago, and I would love some feedback, or comments, or love, or hate.
So here are some links. Both are shot on a DVX.
Thanks a million.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8YRNa5pjrc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VocSt-viDa4

Cheers,
Austin R. Hartman
email: arhartman@gmail.com

shorts not shot on an DVX:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1uXN6LHxFHw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_ki-mGWwsk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Q2LpEceCLA

 

[Paul Coleman]

Really liked "Hi, I'm New" and "Surf for Turf". "Surf for Turf" could've used a reflector board and the sound was hit or miss. Good dialog in both. Good stuff. :thumbup:

 

[Andrew Brinkhaus]

You shouldve posted this in the DVX clips/footage section. You will get alot more hits that way.

 

[Noel Evans]

I like your storylines and dialogue. Composition isnt quite there.

 

[MalcolmOng]

I preferred Hi, i'm new, however i didnt really get it...unfrotunately the computer i'm watching it on has pretty crappy speakers, so maybe i'll watch it again later to try to get it..

 

[Kirk Gillock]

Nice stuff. They have a definite style and feel to them. Good luck with future projects.

 

[arhartman]

thanks to all, for watching and posting. The Hi, I'm New that is posted on youtube is a really crappy quality. Do you guys know where I can post the large high quality version for people to see?