Production website

looks good.

Has a Ringu feel -- nice.

blacks not the same as background on your banners (if you are making them in photoshop toggle internet only colors on)

and shouldn't "neighbors" and "psychotics" be
"neighbors' " and "psychotic's"
in this sentence
"Now she must unravel her neighbours secrets to end the psychotics reign of terror and keep her own sanity."

this is a little confusing too
"She finds that her neighbours, a young mother and daughter have a frightening secret of their own. In her pursuit for the answers Ayaka stumbles into the world of a psychotic."
because
"She finds that her neighbours, a young mother and daughter have a frightening secret of their own."
and
"In her pursuit for the answers Ayaka stumbles into the world of a psychotic."
are seemingly unrelated tag lines (or are they?)

After reading the last sentence I kind of went "huh? ... wait whose the psychotic? ... the neighbours ... no the sentence doesn't make sense that way ... I guess it's just some psycho."

I know you don't want to give too much a way in your synopsis, but some sort of link should be drawn between the two sentences even if it remains intentionally vague.

Wait ... reading it again ... she's struggling for her sanity ... I think ... oh ... not clear.

I think the phrase "world of a psychotic" makes it sound like another person is involved. I would suggest

"Ayaka Sasaki, a 28 year old woman haunted by the images of a gruesome discovery during her high school years, is starting over.

She has a new life, a new job, a new apartment, but soon learns her neighbours, a young mother and daughter, have a frightening secret of their own.

In her pursuit for answers Ayaka tumbles into a world of madness where she must unravel the neighbors secrets to save her own sanity."

I think that's what your saying. But this is clearer and has a little more punch IMO.
 
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it doesn't end where the main character discovers that she, in actuality, is the psychotic killer does it? nice little web site, btw. wanted to mention that you mini-teaser is very recognizable as a Motion template to anyone who owns it. might want to try something more orginal. Motion is a lot of fun to play with.
 
Looks good. I think the title of your film is a little hard to read. It looks like there's an offset blurry version of the text above the original. Maybe make that a bit more see through?

I really do like the site. Strong and simple. And you give the image center stage.
 
I concur with the title being a bit hard to read, I really had to see through the filtered stuff. The other thing I noticed was that the title changes position when I load the next page. This is a minor distraction and probably more of a pet peeve of mine than anything else. other than that it looks real good. best of luck with the project:)
 
Ah thanks for taking a look all. JDS Whilst your tag line isnt exactly on the money, it does cover enough and as you say has a nice little punch... so thanks Ill be updating that when I get a chance tomorrow.

Point noted on the title also, Ill tweak that a little.

wanted to mention that you mini-teaser is very recognizable as a Motion template to anyone who owns it.
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Truly wanted to, but just dont have the time right now so I used a template.

P.S. The soundtrack to the little teaser was created in soundtrack pro, just mixing a few of the presets.
 
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Ah thanks for taking a look all. JDS Whilst your tag line isnt exactly on the money, it does cover enough and as you say has a nice little punch... so thanks Ill be updating that when I get a chance tomorrow...
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Glad its of use, although it was awkward spelling "neighbor" as "neighbour" ... when will you Ozzies learn how to spell :)
 
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