HAPPY BIRTHDAY MsManhattan!!!

the fables at the tables of the sick and disabled
say that shes a legend and can be never be cradled
Her moves are smooth and sooth with intent
they will daze and amaze with a craze thats bent
to survive the thrive of her stride is impossible
Her hive equals five times lives put in hospitals
nothing can escape her yay-long grasp
so dont get caught staring at her asp.
 
My partner certainly has a way with words, and I'm sure he has only the best intentions, but I'm quite sure he is going to delete that before this LADY has to get all PRODUCAH on his ass!
 
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so now Aram is on the outs
cuz his rhymes were goin'
south of the border
though his rhymes were made to order
some discression
was the question
it's the better part of valor
just look at ol' yaller
he was a little doggy
and oh we loved him so
but we never talked about him
like he's a little ho
cuz you know
the flow
won't glow
with the Hi Pro
when you be tellin stories
in the board, bed, or locker room
'bout late night visits to the womb
and who is zoomin whom.
So don't be takin 'shrooms
and don't be actin' whack
but I guess it's all okay
cuz you took your rhymes back
and MsManhattan can stop her heart atack
ack ack ack, you oughta know by now
that I'm just foolin' with you dawg
cuz you my little homie
but its her birfday thread
she and we don't wanna hear about
things in the bed
that turn faces red
though I get what you said
was all in fun
cuz she's got
buns
hon,
So keep the naughty naughty
on the "D""L", Hughgley
and try to front more prudely
put your coat over some puddles
try startin' with some cuddles
then will you hit it?
Who knows? Maybe.
Cuz Miss Leslie, she a Lady.
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briceman said:
dude... lol... just judge everything I say! j/k ;)

Sure ... could you do me a favor and put spaces on BOTH sides of your elipses.

I'm gonna need ya to go back through all 3K of your posts and edit that, thanks.

Oh and not to judge or anything, but you're not saying anything ... its called writing, thanks.
 
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