Music Video - HVX200e + SGpro r.2

I would not have gone hand held on the opening shot. I think slow motion and hand held does not mix well. I would also not have framed the two shots or the three shots from such a distance because the empty zone is too large. I would not have shot against a black backgound without backlight. The table scene looks too staged. The woman at the table seems too "amateur" in her looks and performance. The two guys at the bar are lit from one front source and it just looks unlit or not professionally lit. Art direction wise you have no colour scheme. Certain park shots are overexposed. The strip bar shots and the profile against the singer are the best images. The rest is not quite convincing.