My Latest Film- The Mend

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[Mickey Munday]

i thought it had some good parts, but to me a lot of shots were blurry or out of focus and a lot of the editing seemed choppy overall. some of the composition seemed awkward in a lot of places too. in general it felt disjointed. ie: when the girl first gets the bad news from the doc, his shot seems like the cam was mounted on a tripod, but when showing the girl's reaction it seems like whoever is holding the cam is having a hard time keeping it steady and the shots are very blurry.