Simple MKT video

[Goodkid]

Peace out.

[Gary Huff]

The music level is too loud, you need to have a lower third with her name, I would make the lower third you do have a little smaller and more down to the bottom-left of the screen (you don't have to worry about safe zones if this is only on the web), and do you have any B-roll at all to a) cover up the edits so you don't have to keep using that pan wipe transition over and over and b) to make it more interesting?

[Goodkid]

Thanks for your subjective and conventional thinking/opinion. No harm, no foul just disagree with you on all counts and so does the client.

[HVXguy]

The music is too loud. You can like it all you want but potential clients might find it annoying.
Most TV spots have the music overdriven to the point where you cannot even understand the VO.
Your spot does not go that far but the tingly sounds are a bit much.
What I found more annoying was her hair was a different positions.
And the eye contact was off at times.

[Goodkid]

Opinions are valuable if you respect the person making the observations.