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open-heart burglary · 10-29-2009, 10:24 PM

I waited way too long to get this thread started, so here it finally is.

Lovers is a movie about monsters.

Starring

Jessica Cameron

Thomas Stemrich

Written by Josh Chiara and Thomas Stemrich

Directed by Josh Chiara

Keth Andril · 10-30-2009, 04:37 AM

I wish I could have helped with this one. Can't wait to see it!

EditPhish · 10-30-2009, 05:20 AM

Looks interesting! Looking forward to seeing it... good luck!

Rodney V. Smith · 10-30-2009, 04:03 PM

welcome back guys.

Matt Harris · 10-30-2009, 04:10 PM

i like that poster is sexy but also feels gruesome, like its either sex or death. cool!

Rodney V. Smith · 10-30-2009, 04:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Defcon

i like that poster is sexy but also feels gruesome, like its either sex or death. cool!

sex or death.... better than "cake or death". The cake is a lie...

lawriejaffa · 11-01-2009, 07:27 AM

Quote:

I debated whether to even comment on this one...

I'm noticing a slightly sanctimonious tone to your feedback on the films! I'd consider being wary of lines like that.

For the record i thought this film was interesting (in the positive) - and naturally ill be going on about it (in my delightful intellectual artfarty posh british voiced way) in the audio feedback.

You do have a very autuer style to your work, and its dreamlike. The sex is fine.

Try watching Salo Editphish!! hehe

Shaun Patrick · 11-01-2009, 07:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lawriejaffa

I'm noticing a slightly sanctimonious tone to your feedback on the films! I'd consider being wary of lines like that.

For the record i thought this film was interesting (in the positive) - and naturally ill be going on about it (in my delightful intellectual artfarty posh british voiced way) in the audio feedback.

You do have a very autuer style to your work, and its dreamlike. The sex is fine.

Try watching Salo Editphish!! hehe

I was waiting for the "Salo" bomb to be dropped. Will have to check this film out today.

EditPhish · 11-01-2009, 09:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lawriejaffa

I'm noticing a slightly sanctimonious tone to your feedback on the films! I'd consider being wary of lines like that.

And for that reason I've removed my feedback, since I debated whether to post it or not. I do try to be constructive, and you're right, I probably wasn't here

Marlon Ladd · 11-01-2009, 01:02 PM

You really had a nice, fluid tone to the film. You had some really good shots in here and this was no doubt a sexy film (more sex please!). I thought the red coloring was a little too much, but that's just an opinion. Maybe if you had more contrast between the darks and the lights it would really pop the actors out in those scenes. I think that's why it stood out, because they didn't seem to pop as much as they did in the other scenes. The acting was fine for the most part and you had a pretty good story. Good job.

10-29-2009, 10:24 PM	#1
open-heart burglary Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 41	"LOVERS" a film by Josh Chiara I waited way too long to get this thread started, so here it finally is. Lovers is a movie about monsters. Starring Jessica Cameron Thomas Stemrich Written by Josh Chiara and Thomas Stemrich Directed by Josh Chiara

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Matt Harris Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: West Hollywood, CA Posts: 763	i like that poster is sexy but also feels gruesome, like its either sex or death. cool! __________________ Matt Harris Director / Composer Soul Studio 7, LLC http://www.soulstudio7.com DVX Fest Vet - GLASSJAW / CABIN / CLARA / THE SOLUTION / LAKE WICWAS BACKFIRE / BOUNTY ON A DEAD MAN'S HEAD

11-01-2009, 01:02 PM	#10
Marlon Ladd Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Oklahoma City, OK Posts: 1,753	You really had a nice, fluid tone to the film. You had some really good shots in here and this was no doubt a sexy film (more sex please!). I thought the red coloring was a little too much, but that's just an opinion. Maybe if you had more contrast between the darks and the lights it would really pop the actors out in those scenes. I think that's why it stood out, because they didn't seem to pop as much as they did in the other scenes. The acting was fine for the most part and you had a pretty good story. Good job. __________________ "If a man can do it, I can. . ." Bass Reeves ("Marshal") Check out what's going on with "The JONES'" Feature Film HERE iZaza Slider...Do you?

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