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Old 11-19-2009, 07:14 PM   #171
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Hey Geoff, finally getting around to checking out the entries...

This was beautifully shot. Everything just melded together and nothing was out of place. The VO was perfect and I wouldn't change a thing about it. VO's are really a staple of the noir genre and it really helped to sell that.

As for performances, I think the alley scene seemed a bit forced and unnatural. But other than that, the performances worked well... especially with the voice over.
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