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Old 11-19-2009, 06:14 PM   #171
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Hey Geoff, finally getting around to checking out the entries...

This was beautifully shot. Everything just melded together and nothing was out of place. The VO was perfect and I wouldn't change a thing about it. VO's are really a staple of the noir genre and it really helped to sell that.

As for performances, I think the alley scene seemed a bit forced and unnatural. But other than that, the performances worked well... especially with the voice over.
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Old 11-21-2009, 11:55 PM   #172
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This was one of my favs. Might be biased but I really thought this was well crafted. Nice work dude.
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Old 11-22-2009, 02:10 PM   #173
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Thanks guys. Appreciate the thoughts
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Old 11-22-2009, 10:52 PM   #174
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Surprised this didn't place higher. This was my number 2.
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Old 11-22-2009, 10:56 PM   #175
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Geoff, this was sincerely my favorite of the fest. I loved every beat right up to the last frame.
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Old 11-23-2009, 11:59 AM   #176
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Thanks, Zak. That means a lot coming from you as I've got deep respect for your skills and work.
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Old 11-23-2009, 12:00 PM   #177
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Ditto to Zak, i thought this was top 3 for sure.
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Old 12-03-2009, 12:06 PM   #178
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In camera. I wanted to be able to see exactly what I'd be working with. Black and white is tricky because you can no longer use color as a separation medium. You have to compose your shots more carefully and work towards creating contrast using light and dark portions of the frame.
Wow nice... I like the work (I know i'm late and all) the pacing was well done.
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