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Revsta · 11-07-2009, 02:25 PM

http://www.vimeo.com/7489700

Let me know what you think.

Ben_B · 11-07-2009, 03:38 PM

Private...password?

Revsta · 11-07-2009, 04:03 PM

Sorry, I had the wrong one linked. This should work.

http://www.vimeo.com/7489700

ajamils · 11-07-2009, 04:41 PM

very nice. Mind sharing some info about the settings and lens uses ?

Revsta · 11-07-2009, 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ajamils

very nice. Mind sharing some info about the settings and lens uses ?

Sure. Smooth mode, -2 Contrast, -2 NR. I used a Ciecio7 lens adapter FD mount. 24mm for the wide, 50mm for everything else and just moved the camera in for the close ups. 500 watt soft box just above the camera to emulate the ceiling lights. Shot 1080p and that's about it.

Revsta · 11-07-2009, 08:33 PM

150 views and no comments?

Paul Shields · 11-08-2009, 12:03 AM

I liked the warm tone on this one. Not so keen on the quick cuts, though I can't watch Cribs on MTV for the same reason. They give me a headache

. Also not an Oreo fan, but I'm sure they taste lovely!

themartist · 11-08-2009, 11:26 AM

Some nice elements, but if you're looking for critical feedback...

I think the shots needed to be tightened up. The wide establishing shot is weak. The box, table, character and dark styleless room form a poorly composed wide shot. Perhaps lowering the camera would've improved it. That was the most disturbing thing for me. Need to tighten up a bit... but the close ups and ending were much better. Then, the idea of mushing up the Oreos didn't really look very appetizing, so not really a great pitch for Oreos on that level. Lastly, music... really need to change that.

Revsta · 11-08-2009, 11:28 AM

I didn't have a real place to shoot the scene, so we ended up just doing it at my house at the counter. We wanted to have a backdrop and a white counter, or a seemless colored counter top and background, but we didn't have any resources with which to do so, so that's what we ended up using.

Kellar42 · 11-08-2009, 03:12 PM

This is spec right? I'm still not that familiar with the process, but I find it interesting.

11-07-2009, 02:25 PM	#1
Revsta Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: x0\|Maine\|USA\|\|0\|0\| Posts: 377	GH1 Oreo commercial 1080p 24p http://www.vimeo.com/7489700 Let me know what you think. Last edited by Revsta; 11-07-2009 at 04:02 PM.

11-07-2009, 03:38 PM	#2
Ben_B Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Davis and Santa Cruz, CA Posts: 2,619	Private...password? __________________ "Can't stop the signal." http://www.vimeo.com/benbunch benbunchfilms.com

11-07-2009, 04:41 PM	#4
ajamils Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Richmond, Tx Posts: 295	very nice. Mind sharing some info about the settings and lens uses ? __________________

11-08-2009, 11:26 AM	#8
themartist Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 81	Some nice elements, but if you're looking for critical feedback... I think the shots needed to be tightened up. The wide establishing shot is weak. The box, table, character and dark styleless room form a poorly composed wide shot. Perhaps lowering the camera would've improved it. That was the most disturbing thing for me. Need to tighten up a bit... but the close ups and ending were much better. Then, the idea of mushing up the Oreos didn't really look very appetizing, so not really a great pitch for Oreos on that level. Lastly, music... really need to change that. Last edited by themartist; 11-08-2009 at 11:33 AM.

11-08-2009, 03:12 PM	#10
Kellar42 Senior Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Panama Posts: 471	This is spec right? I'm still not that familiar with the process, but I find it interesting. __________________ Stuart Hooper

11-07-2009, 04:03 PM	#3
Revsta Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: x0\|Maine\|USA\|\|0\|0\| Posts: 377	Sorry, I had the wrong one linked. This should work. http://www.vimeo.com/7489700

11-07-2009, 08:33 PM	#6
Revsta Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: x0\|Maine\|USA\|\|0\|0\| Posts: 377	150 views and no comments?

11-08-2009, 12:03 AM	#7
Paul Shields Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 30	I liked the warm tone on this one. Not so keen on the quick cuts, though I can't watch Cribs on MTV for the same reason. They give me a headache . Also not an Oreo fan, but I'm sure they taste lovely!

11-08-2009, 11:28 AM	#9
Revsta Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: x0\|Maine\|USA\|\|0\|0\| Posts: 377	I didn't have a real place to shoot the scene, so we ended up just doing it at my house at the counter. We wanted to have a backdrop and a white counter, or a seemless colored counter top and background, but we didn't have any resources with which to do so, so that's what we ended up using.

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