Mastercard Commercial - New Video

[SE7]

Hey guys, me and a few friends recently made a short 60 sec. video...

It's a mimic of those darn Mastercard Commercials!!

Hehe, well if you want to check it out,

click here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVP6X4UWpCM

If you think its funny, please leave a comment or a rating or something..

Thanks,

Colin

[Paul Coleman]

Why not tighten the edit to 30 seconds? Good work, though.

[ChrisHurn]

Hey Colin,

Nice work. I agree with Paul here, I definitely think you can cut it down to 30 seconds, it would be much more interesting and the effect would be far stronger.



-Chris

[maverickstunts]

Too long, too blown out, too over acted.
Be careful about your music, it could come back to bite you.

[Brandon Rice]

Yeah, it was REALLY slow! And the payoff was... just not that funny...

[SE7]

Alright guys... thanks for the replies.

I made a 40 second version rather than a 60 second...

Here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oT7XPILTz9Y

Thanks, Colin

[Paul Coleman]

Much better.

[SE7]

Thanks Paul!! I'm glad you liked it. I agree, the other version was too long, and too slow for a Mastercard Commerical.

I would've made a 30 second version, but I couldn't really cut too much more out of it without it making sense... so 40 seconds is as good as I can get it!!

Thanks,

Colin

[donatello]

it seems to me that if one is making a mimic of a "mastercard commercial" or refferring to it as a commercial that one should make it to the same spec's of the commercial = 40 seconds doesn't count ? and if it doesn't make sense or one can't get it down to 30 sec then in a way the project didn't work ( other then what one has learned from it) ... which should show us ALL that 30 sec spots are not so easy (including mimic's) !

[divxil]

the second one is funny