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Thread: A Girl And Her Zombie
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09-26-2005 08:16 AMRed Package For Hire In Utah // Pm Me For Rates.
09-26-2005 08:31 AM
You did awesome effects, dude! I think it a real shame you did that "no story approach", becase it was so well shot (Bike sequence is a winner!), your zombie was so cool, and the effects were so great (the compositing to the end ir really professional!), that it could be an awesome movie...
I really think that one of the reasons this is funny is because your zombie makeup is so convincing. Still, I though it dragged, for such a simple joke. I wish you could, at least stay introdicing new elements to it, to let it from getting old.
But honeslty I'm very impressed with how polished it is.
PS: How did you shoot the bike sequence? It's so smooth!
09-26-2005 09:50 AM
Thanks. we were rushed to do this and it turned out ok. we fit it in between 5 different projects we were woking on i wanted to spend more time but i was running out of time.
i wanted to participate in the contest so i just turned it in.
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09-26-2005 10:01 AM
I just loved this one. The variety of approaches in this contest has been amazing.
I agree with Taubkin, as good as this is, it goes on for a beat too long. A little bit of trimming, get rid of some of the lesser gags, and you got yerself a great flick.
The zombie was fantastic, not only because of the makeup, but he was a talented physical actor. His bike riding, sliding, stumbling had me in stiches. And the girl played it just right, too.
09-26-2005 10:05 AM
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09-26-2005 03:40 PM
That was just SO DAMN CUTE. I really liked it. It's my girlfriend's favorite so far, I've walked into the room and seen her watching it like 3 times.
There were some great gags, my only complaint was that the music got a bit repetitive.
I do enjoy the slapstick humor, but I would have liked to have seen you change it up a bit. There were 3 slide gags, all were funny; but I think one would have sufficed. The tennis part dragged on a bit as well.
From the opening shot, I was engaged. I thought it was hysterical.
Overall: I really enjoyed it. I think it could have been cut down to 2:00-2:30, and it would have helped A LOT. Especially with the repetetiveness of the gags and music.
09-26-2005 03:43 PM
I agree with most...This short was good but just a bit to dragged out. Your Zombie was great and especially made mw laugh. Good Work.
09-26-2005 03:44 PM
I liked this film. Some tighter editing and this one could have been even better. I know that we are all a little dense around here, but think that even I got it after the second or third tennis ball hit to the zombie's head!
09-26-2005 04:03 PMOriginally Posted by TC