A Girl And Her Zombie

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let me know what you guys think.

[taubkin]

You did awesome effects, dude! I think it a real shame you did that "no story approach", becase it was so well shot (Bike sequence is a winner!), your zombie was so cool, and the effects were so great (the compositing to the end ir really professional!), that it could be an awesome movie...

I really think that one of the reasons this is funny is because your zombie makeup is so convincing. Still, I though it dragged, for such a simple joke. I wish you could, at least stay introdicing new elements to it, to let it from getting old.

But honeslty I'm very impressed with how polished it is.

PS: How did you shoot the bike sequence? It's so smooth!

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taubkin

Thanks. we were rushed to do this and it turned out ok. we fit it in between 5 different projects we were woking on i wanted to spend more time but i was running out of time.
i wanted to participate in the contest so i just turned it in.

The bike sequence was shot with a v16 steadi cam in the back of my truck.

[Curugon]

I just loved this one. The variety of approaches in this contest has been amazing.

I agree with Taubkin, as good as this is, it goes on for a beat too long. A little bit of trimming, get rid of some of the lesser gags, and you got yerself a great flick.

The zombie was fantastic, not only because of the makeup, but he was a talented physical actor. His bike riding, sliding, stumbling had me in stiches. And the girl played it just right, too.

Well done!

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Curugon

Thanks.

[TC]

That was just SO DAMN CUTE. I really liked it. It's my girlfriend's favorite so far, I've walked into the room and seen her watching it like 3 times.

There were some great gags, my only complaint was that the music got a bit repetitive.

I do enjoy the slapstick humor, but I would have liked to have seen you change it up a bit. There were 3 slide gags, all were funny; but I think one would have sufficed. The tennis part dragged on a bit as well.

From the opening shot, I was engaged. I thought it was hysterical.

Overall: I really enjoyed it. I think it could have been cut down to 2:00-2:30, and it would have helped A LOT. Especially with the repetetiveness of the gags and music.

[pywl]

I agree with most...This short was good but just a bit to dragged out. Your Zombie was great and especially made mw laugh. Good Work.

[khmuse]

I liked this film. Some tighter editing and this one could have been even better. I know that we are all a little dense around here, but think that even I got it after the second or third tennis ball hit to the zombie's head!

[TC]

I know that we are all a little dense around here, but think that even I got it after the second or third tennis ball hit to the zombie's head!

Oh! Now I get it!

[khmuse]

Oh! Now I get it!

LMAO