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    Eddy is waking up and realizing he's trapped in the worst way. Somehow he's lodged inside a sewer pipe just below the sidewalk just as a storm is rolling in. Will someone hear him in time?

    https://vimeo.com/76802750

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    The theme, what's behind the emotion, the meaning, all that comes later." - Stanley Kubrick


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    Nice... this kind of thing always freaks me out. Like film that take place underwater or in outerspace...I find it hard to breathe when watching them.
    Can't wait to see the complete film.


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    yeah, that is pretty freaky. Look forward to seeing this one.


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    Thanks! Claustrophobia is definitely one of my greatest fears. I've got a feature length script that this one scene is trying to sell. Hoping it gets made into a feature!

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    Everybody's got their 'pipe dream.' HeHeheh great concept! Good luck!


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    I have zero issues with claustrophobia, but I do have issues being stuck in a small space with sweaty people - lol. Good luck!
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    Sweaty people make life rough for most of us, especially on public transportation! Definitely a 'pipe dream'. lol
    Thanks!!

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    Nice! I look forward to checking this out.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Charli View Post
    I have zero issues with claustrophobia, but I do have issues being stuck in a small space with sweaty people - lol. Good luck!
    Oh...come on Charli...it wasn't THAT bad was it?


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    Quote Originally Posted by ZazaCast View Post
    Oh...come on Charli...it wasn't THAT bad was it?
    It wasn't too bad except for that guy trying to mask his sweaty musk with too much Old Spice...


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