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    Target Rich Environment - by Chris Keaton
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    Target Rich Environment
    A sniper team finds an abundance of kill opportunities.


    *gotta make a poster now.

    This is my entry unless I can come up with a better idea before the deadline.
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    Liked the title....loved the title after I saw the logline.

    Don't know where it's going, but can't wait to find out.
    the writer formerly known as "Conlan Forever"

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    Agreed. Great title!

    I've got to get me one of these threads.
    Chris Johnson


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    I like the title but wonder what the game would be?

    Mind you it sounds like a computer game. Kill the bad guys etc, hope there's a spin on it.

    Ps gave your last MP script an excellent!


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    I like the title and I like snipers. There's an abundance of suspense as the sniper waits for an opportunity to present itself.
    So, you hate your job? There's a support group for that. It's called EVERYONE. We meet at the bar at 5:00.


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    How are you tracking Chris? I've been thinking a lot about the abundance of kill opportunities....a moral target? zombies? war time? or darker still....militia gone mad? a mall (easy to get in, hard to get out)? a park? a school? Can't wait to see which way you jump.


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    Rich environmentalists at Target?
    Sorry, Chris. Not very scary.


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    It's a good title. Yes, it just grabs me - I know you know what I mean


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    Quote Originally Posted by KhamIsk View Post
    It's a good title. Yes, it just grabs me - I know you know what I mean
    It doesn't matter, I'll just let my imagination run wild. ;)
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    Quote Originally Posted by dtroop506 View Post
    Rich environmentalists at Target?
    Sorry, Chris. Not very scary.
    I'm retarded. Just got it.


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