Thanks Chris, I know you tend to wade through some "pretty messed up" material of your own, so I'm glad you appreciated my take on it.

I tried to make a conscience effort to write the film so that a creative film maker could make this without having to use twins. So I tried to avoid any direct contact between the two, grabbing each other, fighting each other etc.

Hmm...I'll have to revisit Mae's dialogue.

oops...I just noticed two posts up I spelled penis wrong, well that's just embarrassing. It's bad enough I used the word at all, could of went with tool or junk or anything else. :P

Okay that was ADHD.

Thanks for taking the time to read and give me the feedback.