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    I...Win (My Pain is Your Pain)

    Identical twins share a connection that takes sibling rivalry to the next level.







    I may enter with "My Pain is Your Pain" as the title. Still undecided.
    Last edited by Russell Moore; 08-27-2012 at 08:23 AM. Reason: added Logline
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    I like the title. It got me to look at what you've got.


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    Made me click.
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    That's cheating, you can't lose with that title


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    Good to hear the title is well received, now I'm probably going to change it

    Logline added....Poster to come(hopefully) I have no ideas for it yet. Not to mention I have yet to start writing the script, but I have worked out a basic outline in my head.
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    Strong concept.

    My initial thought for a title was... "Win:Win". Has a sense of both being the same.

    I love the basis for this, lots to play with. Do they know each other that well? Are they the same? Can they predict? Do they want the same thing, eg girl?

    Interested to read this one.

    All the best.


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    I like the pause in the title. Very ominous.
    So, you hate your job? There's a support group for that. It's called EVERYONE. We meet at the bar at 5:00.


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    Okay...being the master procrastinator that I am....I am about 90% done with my first very rough draft and...now I have to go to work. Will finish when I get home. Let it set for a day and then rewrite. Let my wife (my toughest critic) read it and then rewrite it again.

    Not sure if this is going to turn out to be horror or just weird.
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    I'll back your ballerina coming of age story (terrifying) if you back my uplifting returned-veteran-finds-new-age-religion-and-cures-cancer-with-love-beams rom-com (the horror).

    Weird is a kind of horror isn't it?

    Or just put these in your title I....Win


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    Should be good. Twins can be pretty creepy.


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