Short Film - Shot on DVX100A - Need Feedback

[eramix]

[B]Shot this 30Min. Short Comedy with the DVX100A. Please, be patient. I think it will be worth your time. I'd love some feedback...

Synopsis:
A Much Too Open House - Comedy - 2005
Carl Rayner proudly sets up his first open house as a newly-licensed real estate agent. It doesn't take long, however, for him to notice that this open house seems to be attracting more than its share of eccentric types. Is it his imagination, or is this house drawing every wing nut in town? And what can he do when he receives news that brands the property as unsellable at any price?

Aram

***video deleted*** Thanks for all your posts!

[Jay Rodriguez]

that was some good work!!!!! Two thumbs up.

[Jamison]

AMAZING WORK!!! BRAVO!!! BEST FILM I HAVE SEEN ON THIS FORUM SITE EVER!!! Story was funny, shots were clean, effective editing, best acting i have seen on any forum site period, directing was the best i have seen on any of these short films by far and when i say this i mean your not even in the same league!! ill be looking out for you in the near future!! GREAT JOB! WOW Speechless

[Northainan]

This look like it was shot on a Panavision rather than a Panasonic DVX100A. Incredible. What did you use for lighting?

[Cleavage2]

Will let you know once this mammoth download has finished

[dvpixl]

i agree. that was very well made. story well told. a bit confusing here and there but I get it...

it was very pro.

[eramix]

Thank you for all the feedback. Please keep them coming.

Aram

Equipment used:
Panasonic DVX-100A
Sennheiser M66 Shotgun Mic
Bogen Tripod Fluid Head
Final Cut Pro HD
Apple Power Mac G4
JW Lighting 750Watt Kit $200

[Cleavage2]

I thought it was very well put together, it's hard to keep a film interesting particularly when it's set in one location. The only thing I didn't really like about it was the occasional shot that zoomed in (except for the ones where he sees the sprinkler), they just felt a bit amateur, similarly with some of the transition edits.

Overall a very well done film, directing and acting was very good. Great job.

[Chance White]

Very impressed. Good performances, funny... I felt it dragged just a little in the middle, and the ending felt a little cheesy to me honestly, but overall I think you have a very good short on your hands. Congratulations.

[Edalgo_Alvarez]

I loved the part where he was coming up with excuses for people not to buy the house, I thought he had lost his mind but then the ending reveals it all. Very nice!

-Edalgo