Malice (shot with GH2, Sedna hack)

[concius]

I made this for school. Shot with GH2, 156mbit, sedna Q20 hack.
Nokton 25mm f0,95 lens

[HDkilledFILM.]

Honestly some of the best work I've seen in a long time. You set the mood, got the performances, kept the right pace. It's a simple piece that is flawless in it's execution. Bravo. Keep making work like this. PLEASE.-Adam

[concius]

Wow, thank you so much .

[reem12]

What a powerful little short. I echo the words of Hdkilledfilm. Great lighting and cinematography as well as execution of story. I understand its only so much info you can put into a story but although there seems to be some missing pieces to how he lost his daughter and got to where he is, at least to me. I get it.

You also did the Gh2 a great service. My only minor gripes is that you would have kept the subtitles throughout and cleaned up a few color corrections, in which in my opinion would have made this a near flawless short. Wish you the very best with this and hope it is entered in festivals.

[concius]

Thank you reem12! There are idd some faults in this version. (color is some shots, subtitels, just like you said. And other little things) This version will be online for a week, after that week I"ll update it to the final version.
And about the backstory of my character. I had an extra scene: at the house, he normally went inside and spoke with malice. Then you saw his ex-wife.. etc, all a dream of course.In that scene I told something about their history. But in Post production I chose not to use it. The scene wasn't like i hoped it to be.

thank you (my english is not that good, so maybe i use sometimes the wrong words)

[reem12]

Thank you for update and your english is plenty good for me to understand.

I'm a sucker for a good story and great visuals. And when I'm able to get a combination of both from the indie community I'm excited. Not enough concentration on good story telling like the old days. I applaud you once again for a great short.

On a side note, I had to discard some in my opinion, very key footage to my film as well, but combed through it over and over to see what i could take from it to connect the dots of my story without sacrificing quality. Best wishes.

[gundar]

Amazingly Awesome! Great work. Coloring is great, tempo is great. I even watched the first time in mute and it was still great.

[concius]

Thank you guys . I'm really happy to hear this. Gives me energy to make an other one