We would like to get some good critique for our short film The Story of a Mistress.
IF anyone got some time and want something to watch, we would like your support.
Comments here or on YouTube would be great. Thanks in advance!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wjjf5bOqU8Q

The Story of a Mistress (Robinson Brothers, 2012)

Synopsis:
Naomi discovers her boyfriend would not leave his other family for her, so she decides to seek revenge.

Directors:
The Robinson Brothers
Written:
R.M. Robinson
Score:
Jonathan Robinson
Edited:
The Robinson Brothers

OS:
Windows 7
Camera:
Canon 550/T2i + Magic Lantern
Editing App:
Adobe Premiere CS 5.5
VFX app:
Adobe After Effects CS 5.5
Composing App:
Nuendo 4