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    ScriptFEST Mod Chris_Keaton's Avatar
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    I think I was high when I wrote my review.
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    Ok cool yeah I really like that premise - just maybe there are some leftover remnants from your original idea still in there that could be cleared out. Or just make it a teeny bit more obvious. It's a great idea.


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