Run Lily Run trailer

[totitefilms]

Please check out the trailer of my short action film. It was shot with Canon T2i and HV20.

[sonofaresiii]

looking for feedback? or just promoting?

[totitefilms]

both ;)

[Chris Adler]

I found it nauseating.

[totitefilms]

probably because all the shaking camera movements ;)

[totitefilms]

I'm in the final editing stage of the movie. Here is the new trailer

[j1clark@ucsd.edu]

I'm in the final editing stage of the movie. Here is the new trailer

The edits were really 'slow' relative to building action... in this case, even 1/2 second of 'running' is too much, especially when the woman seems to be running at less than 'top speed'.

Since you're using the title "Run Lily Run", I suggest you watch "Lola Rennt"(1999) aka in English "Run Lola Run".



Most of the shots of Lola running are less than 1/2 second, and are intercut with 'other stuff' relative to the story, such as people, cars, etc. getting in the way... It also starts off 'rather slow' with Lola stationary at a crossroads... get it... she has to make a choice... run... or accept the consequences...

The woman in your trailer looks more like she's out for a morning jog...