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    Sorry. I didn't care much for it. It did nothing for me. How did he get in the box? Is really trapped? The guard is cliche for no reason. What bugged me more is that if the concept was that the guard points out "read the sign" then why not just tell ANGRY MAN that in the first place? Or, if for some reason ANGRY MAN is unable to pull open the door (both?) why not have the guard help him out. Angry Man isn't a bad guy, is he? If Guard is, why tell Angry man at all? Why not just show me the sign?


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    Hahahaha, that was clever. A little extreme -- the man was a little psychotic, but that works for the punch line at the end. The guard drawing his gun didn't really make sense, though.

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