Thread: "Thick Window"

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    This was a nice entry with some good performances.
    I'll echo the comment about the sparks, because i think it would be just as effective without them. I also think the end shot with bus stop and the poster could be done differently or taken out all together.
    All in all a good film. Well done.


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    Nice storyboard work in the BTS. I enjoyed the BTS. Haven't had a chance to watch the film. Will do so soon.


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    Great acting. Also enjoyed the lighting. Story - a solid B. I'm not that good at guessing twists, but I pretty much saw this one coming.
    Still over all I enjoyed it much and you had a great submission. Look forward to more.


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    I watched it and liked it a lot. Your actress is great, the man too but considering she's just a child - she did a superb job! It's paced very well. The shot of him changing the window is very powerful.
    The only thing I'm not sure about is the ending - I thought it's apocalypses or something - that would suit the story better I think. I read the script on MoviePoet first - it's a great script.


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