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    I was a cop for a while, so these things jump out at me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chris_Keaton View Post
    I was a cop for a while, so these things jump out at me.
    There seems to be a few folks with similar experience around here.


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    What an appropriate entry for Villainfest.
    I'll just echo the same issues that have already been said.

    I thought the shot of the cops face bouncing on the floor was good use of dark humour.


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    Congratulations on your first entry. It would have been nice if you could have been in the fest.


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    Great entry. I thought your actors did great - kudos. One of the best of the villain films IMHO.
    As for constructive criticism I will also echo those prior. Look forward to seeing more from you.


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    Matthew, Ashpatel, and Sunk99 Thanks for watching and for the kind words.

    I'm not sure why I didn't qualify for the fest to be honest??? Maybe the BTS movie is necessary and I didn't have that or a poster. So not sure why it didn't qualify. I'm not fretting too much about it because I do it for the feed back and not prizes. You guys make me a better filmmaker and thats prize enough.


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    yup, you needed BTS and a Poster to qualify. Still though, cool movie you made!
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    Spoiler:
    Looked good. Sounded good. Paced good. The face lick was great. Good twist too. The acting was great in spots and not so great in others. Maybe think about less score. Itís a good score, but it was loud at points and felt like it distracted slightly. The cop interaction was a little far fetched but what the hell, I'll believe there are some bone head cops out there. I really like the twist. Very slick.
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