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    Oh btw, I think you spelled Xanax versus Xanex wrong on the bottle.

    I had to look up Zanny the Nanny. I get the reference now. Nice.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mobie540 View Post
    Oh btw, I think you spelled Xanax versus Xanex wrong on the bottle.

    I had to look up Zanny the Nanny. I get the reference now. Nice.
    Yes... wouldn't want a copyright infringment... those drug companies can be brutal!


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    Hey, for the record (not to knock anybody), I liked the light sweep of the legs. I thought it fit and was more of trying to show who she was and what she was about, which was dressing scantily clad and partying. Plus it was a cool shot.


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    I just watched this thanks to Zaza sending me a film of a size I could actually download.

    There is nothing I can think of to add that would add anything to the story. It was pretty damned creepy. I also had no problem with the leg sweep because it did show the type of party girl she was. As a first time actress she did a really great job. Excellent!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Marlon Ladd View Post
    Hey, for the record (not to knock anybody), I liked the light sweep of the legs. I thought it fit and was more of trying to show who she was and what she was about, which was dressing scantily clad and partying. Plus it was a cool shot.
    Thanks Marlon...and it only took 10,000 takes to get it right!

    Quote Originally Posted by Chris_Keaton View Post
    I just watched this thanks to Zaza sending me a film of a size I could actually download.

    There is nothing I can think of to add that would add anything to the story. It was pretty damned creepy. I also had no problem with the leg sweep because it did show the type of party girl she was. As a first time actress she did a really great job. Excellent!
    Glad you liked it Chris, thanks for leaving a comment.


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    Not bad! Short and sweet! (another of my possible suggestions for future fests, because I often find that the extra time wasn't necessary for many shorts)... I like that you pretty much got right to the point. I also appreciate the establishing shots to define who she is... AND it doesn't hurt that this short is really current (nothing more to say here or it's a spoiler).

    My only criticism, at least on my macbook... is that it's dark... but the sound was nice and clear. In the parting shot... I had mixed feelings about the (audio) performance, but it was still adequate to give me chills.

    I didn't want to read anything above my "review"... as suggested by another member in MAH's thread... but yeah, I was going to comment on the light sweep across the legs too... see last sentence of first paragraph. (that... bitch!)
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    Spot on delivery of the first line, it set the mood really well and I cannot stress enough how much it made me loath her character. I was actually hoping for a twist just so I could see something bad happen to her haha. Good build from there. Great job.


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    Quote Originally Posted by MattinSTL View Post
    Not bad! Short and sweet! (another of my possible suggestions for future fests, because I often find that the extra time wasn't necessary for many shorts)... I like that you pretty much got right to the point. I also appreciate the establishing shots to define who she is... AND it doesn't hurt that this short is really current (nothing more to say here or it's a spoiler).

    My only criticism, at least on my macbook... is that it's dark... but the sound was nice and clear. In the parting shot... I had mixed feelings about the (audio) performance, but it was still adequate to give me chills.

    I didn't want to read anything above my "review"... as suggested by another member in MAH's thread... but yeah, I was going to comment on the light sweep across the legs too... see last sentence of first paragraph. (that... bitch!)
    Thanks for watching Matt & commenting! I played with it a bit and tried to get it just right for a variety of monitors, sorry you found it dark (althought it was night)....but it was shot at night with mostly available light. I used a little LED light on the dash for a little fill. Dark subject too...

    Quote Originally Posted by Chris Lukeman View Post
    Spot on delivery of the first line, it set the mood really well and I cannot stress enough how much it made me loath her character. I was actually hoping for a twist just so I could see something bad happen to her haha. Good build from there. Great job.
    This is the reaction I was looking for... thanks Chris!


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    Nice poster. Was that all through the lens or was some photoshop blur involved?


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    Quote Originally Posted by ashpatel View Post
    Nice poster.
    ... I could say the same to you!


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