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    The story, well, trickled... but did it trickle well? Uh...<br><br>
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    <br>No, it did not. Yes, continuity is an issue when it stands out so much that we can all see it. There are small mistakes in movies that I catch that my family doesn't because I'm just aware. With this flick, you don't have to be aware to see its issues, there were too many.<br><br>I agree that when you have to explain your story, it falls short in the film itself because the storytelling should all be within the film itself (which is why I don't like "supers" or "voice overs"). The TWIST was you only solid hit here.<br><br>But here is the thing. That's a cinder block she was tied to...logically, she could have moved the block with her hands and placed it under her head. That would have kept her above water. You have to think of every contingency. I did not "buy" into his plight or into his emotion.<br><br>This short is Wednesday's child, it has far to go.<br><br>
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    I thought the camera gave a really gorgeous old film look however the story didn't suit me, everything ended a little too abruptly. I was just like, 'what?'

    It also felt a little thin, I can't put my finger on it.

    These are little nitpicks however, and this short happens to be one of my faves
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    I didn't really care much for the film. i am sorry but I wanted a lot more from it. But hey you got one finished.





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    Thanks for all the crits reviews, opinions, hot air and love. All is much appreciated by me. Thanks for playing all that did.
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