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    I'm a local Portland-area student film-maker just getting on the DVXboards more often.

    It's a good film man. Well done. A simpler story without dialogue can often make the audience engage and try to draw more from it themselves, so good job on that. A very energetic piece, and it ties up together well at the end.

    The only thing I can think of is perhaps use subtitles and ADR during the scene where the fighter and the guy with the backpack are talking. Something very short, very simple, a couple exchanges. I think it'd work quite nicely.


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    Thanks David.

    Yeah, we'll be adding subs and finishing the sound design for the festival run.

    Did you show your senior project at Ben Parslow's sci-fi premiere at the Hollywood Theater? If so, I saw and enjoyed it!


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    good work
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    Money Money,nice work done.thanks AJ.


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    hi AJ,
    thanks for the movie, it is such a great scene, can't believe this.
    wish you the best of luck.


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    I really liked this film. Being on location made a world of difference. Your actors felt real. There was so much honesty in this short.

    Great job AJ.
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    Quote Originally Posted by lawriejaffa View Post
    Imagine the same story told about a kid in the USA who in the passing shot wanders into Yale (we'd be puking in a bucket right?) - not so here.
    Agreed - I thought the same thing.

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    but this is a winner. It might not win here - but its a winner Well done
    Agreed again - consider putting it into some European short film fests - it might do well over here.


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    [QUOTE=lawriejaffa;2287730]Hey there AJ Brooks! Well happy to oblige request for feedback!


    Imagine the same story told about a kid in the USA who in the passing shot wanders into Yale (we'd be puking in a bucket right?) - not so here.

    You just have no imagination jaffa!!
    AJ great job on the film. It was a well deserved win.


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    Congrats AJ. Sorry about hearing about why you couldn't use the Red but I understand, hehe.
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    I just watched this. It was really amazing. I've never seen this much production value in a dvxfest film. Very well done.


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