Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. Collapse Details
    An internet spot for VARVOUZOS jewellery
    #1
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2010
    Posts
    14
    Cool
    Shot on HPX-172 with CINEVATE Brevis and NIKON 50mm f1.2 AI-S, 24mm f1.4 AF-S & 85mm f1.4 AF-S.

    Do let me know what you think! Any comments is much appreciated!



    Reply With Quote
     

  2. Collapse Details
    #2
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Suriname
    Posts
    2,772
    Default
    I like your cinematography and I dont mind edgy commercials.

    Now dont take this the wrong way ....but the first shot of the girl pressing on her knees looks likes she wants to take a dump and not a jump.... to me IMO. It looks to "I'm acting as if Im about to end it !"
    It's different from juwellery spots. As a viewer Im getting two messages . We sell jewellery which you can wear when you want to inflict harm on your self and ofcourse we sell jewellery that's on the edge, literaly. Also for effect the shot of the girl on the egde of a builing? needed a little wind !

    Visually I enjoyed it but as a commercial I'm not to sure about that.

    Just an opionon !


    Reply With Quote
     

  3. Collapse Details
    #3
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2010
    Posts
    14
    Default
    Haha! Thanks for your thoughts Everts! Watching it again, I see what you mean... Perhaps the fondling of the knees was a bad directing tip. At the moment of the shoot, it was supposed to represent nerves... But I guess people also fondle their knees when sitting on the porcelain throne!

    Thanks for the compliments! I am new and learning and every comment helps!


    Reply With Quote
     

  4. Collapse Details
    #4
    Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    Italy
    Posts
    60
    Default
    I am sorry: where is the clip?


    Reply With Quote
     

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •