Great film. It's such a shame you weren't able to get it in on time.
You're right about your actors, they do have a great chemistry together. They both felt so natural.
I liked the look of this a lot and I especially liked that it didn't end in violence, which was a nice twist, because I definitely thought it was coming.
So, well done, and thank for sharing it.
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03-10-2010 03:19 PM
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03-10-2010 04:08 PM
Nice film! Although I am partial to everyone dying in the end this was a nice change.
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03-10-2010 07:13 PM
Yeah, I wanted to do two cuts but ran out of time on top of it all. Since everything was so rushed and last minute I just couldn't get it done. I'll revisit the audio at a later date and possibly see if the talent wants to do ADR for the hell of it.
Hey, they still let me upload the film for "exhibition only" so check it out if you're curious. I did end up using the audio off of the h4n anyway.-
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03-10-2010 07:20 PM
Yeah, the gun poster can really throw ya ;) Thanks for checking it out and I'm really glad you liked it!
Well, for the next fest I'll probably kill off everyone... since it'll be the spring fest, it might have a "love" theme like Love Fest in the past... hehe.
Because I'm phasing the DVX out and was really wanting the H4n to do the trick. I got some tips that I'll try with the H4n but if I have to shoot anything soon, I'll do just that. The DVX is a great cam, even now.-
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03-10-2010 07:37 PM
oh you did get your film uploaded - i loved this! seriously, everything. this was one of the first films i watched. i thought the sound was fine? whats the ptoblem?
Matt Harris
Director / Composer / Colorist / Motion graphics
http://www.imdb.me/matthewrichardharris
DVXFEST ENTRIES: GLASSJAW / CABIN / CLARA / THE SOLUTION / LAKE WICWAS / BACKFIRE
BOUNTY ON A DEAD MAN'S HEAD / VACCINE / NO HORIZON / THE BOATSHED / CLEAR SPACE
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03-10-2010 07:48 PM
Great film Stinkpot! I liked everything about it. The acting was wonderful, good chemistry between the two of them. That guy has to be the dumbest 'hitman' I've ever seen...even a kid knows you don't shove a gun down the front of your pants! LOL.
The camera work was good, maybe just a few more medium shots to get a better idea of the surroundings. I know you had trouble with the audio, but it felt like the music was too loud also.
Guns...but hey, no one got shot...that we know of... There was the rest of the night and I'd never trust a woman with a gun.
Really good job on this one, it was a pleasure to watch. Thanks!
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03-10-2010 10:26 PM
Great to see this. Very nice piece, and too bad it's not competing. Next time....
Aside from the audio issues, it looked great, had great dialog and very good acting. I like that it's just a conversation. I think that's one of the more difficult things to do- have two people sit down and talk, and keep it engaging, which it was.
Thanks for sharing!
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03-10-2010 11:07 PM
Just watched it and have to agree your actors had great chemistry. Wasn't sure where it was going on the intro, you definitely caught me off guard with the story. Very professional looking, think you did a great job on this one!
"Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful, committed citizens can change the world. Indeed, it is the only thing that ever has." -Margaret Mead
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03-11-2010 10:34 AM
Thanks Defcon. I had fixed the sound somewhat since posting my initial rant. Now that I've uploaded it, I've since gone back and tweaked it even more and it's vastly improved.
Thanks a lot Zaza! Yeah, the gun in the front of the pants is more symolic than anything -haha!
I agree that the music is too loud... it needed to be run through some filters as well (like room reverb and a lowpass filter for bathroom scene) since it's supposed to sound like it's playing at the bar and not a soundtrack to the movie.
When I first read the script I was kind of worried how to poull of a 6 minute conversation... but the bathroom scene breaks it up a bit.
Thanks for checking out!
Thanks alot GoodLuck! Personally, I'm surprized we got a decent look out of it since the lighting in the place was awful and one of my kit lights blew a bulb right when we started. Overall, my favs are the CUs after he sits back down.-
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