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    Quote Originally Posted by jamiejay View Post
    photoshop is fun... great job with the poster. the bells..."what a tale of terror now their turbulency tells!"... glad you entered.
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    Just finished your script - enjoyed all the action. I did feel the "awe" of the spaceship - loved the bells. I agree the ending dialogue doesn't add to the story though. Maybe he doesn't have to say anything? I don't know- good job though. I am totally depressed you wrote it in only about an hour.


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    thanks - yeah, spring break, kids home, and all their friends want skillet-fried chicken (I guess most parents just don't "do" comfort food any more) - ain't got no time!!! But at least I felt like I didn't over-think something for once... and the gravy came out great.


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