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    Quote Originally Posted by Marlon Ladd View Post
    This was a great read. This to me, would be funny to anybody. If you aren't into Star Wars or Star Trek there has got to be something wrong with you. I love them both and I would go crazy if somebody had to make me choose between the two. Couples fight about the silliest things and although this seems silly, it's not. And especially for big time fans.

    Very realistic and snappy dialogue and I think an alternate ending (what arroway suggested) may work as well.

    Nice!
    Thanks, man. I appreciate the read.

    The only problem with the alternate ending is that Han did shoot first.

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    Hi Mike,

    I just read this little baby. I really liked it. I had a few laughs while going through it.

    I have to agree with arroway about the ending. It seems to deflate (a little too abruptly) a good chunk of what you built up. You could probably just end it at Emily's single word reply of "Trekker". Seems to me that would work.

    Will Ian be playing the role of Michael? Or maybe you'll fill the shoes yourself? You know...with your name being Michael and all...just saying ;)


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    Congratz Mike. You wrote a very good and funny script.
    the writer formerly known as "Conlan Forever"

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    Funny script Mike! Very easy, enjoyable read. Very different from your usual dark moody films. Not that one style is better than the other, but it's nice to see how well you can do both. Hard not to picture Ian as the lead...


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    Thanks, everyone.

    Jason, I've actually done a couple of comedies but I prefer the dark stuff.
    I was actually offering this one up for grabs. No bites as of yet.

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    I actual remember seeing Ronald, but that was still pretty dark.

    If it were me, I'd be hesitant to make this script just because Collections Vol. 4 tread similar territory. Very different stories, but a common central image.


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    Quote Originally Posted by jasonthewho View Post
    I actual remember seeing Ronald, but that was still pretty dark.

    If it were me, I'd be hesitant to make this script just because Collections Vol. 4 tread similar territory. Very different stories, but a common central image.
    Yah, completely different though.

    I think it could do well in the right hands.


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    Congrats! Thank god you wrote this. I needed something to chear me up after all those tear jerkers! Great job!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Anthony Todaro View Post
    Congrats! Thank god you wrote this. I needed something to chear me up after all those tear jerkers! Great job!
    Thanks! I know what you mean. I was running out of Kleenex.
    I'm just glad a comedy managed to sneak into the top 3.

    Thanks again for reading.

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