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    Thanks, guys. Glad you liked the title as well.

    Making likable characters is a bonus.

    Cheers,

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    Somebody call the Pun Police on DE. Shoot to kill.

    And MAH, I hope you're happy--you've now totally spoiled Patrick Stewart's catchphrase for me.

    As my last ScriptFest entry probably proved, I'm a sucker for fanboy bickering, so I enjoyed this one a lot. My one nitpick would be that, even after Michael has disowned Episodes I - III, Emily still makes them pretty much her exclusive focus. If she's really going after him, she should take some digs at IV - VI, especially after he goes after TOS.

    But that's a minor point, and doesn't spoil the overall enjoyment. Nicely done.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Captain Pierce View Post
    Somebody call the Pun Police on DE. Shoot to kill.

    And MAH, I hope you're happy--you've now totally spoiled Patrick Stewart's catchphrase for me.
    LOL! Thanks, man.

    I think any good Trek fan will go for blood. We all know that there is plenty of blood in the Episode I - III water.
    We can try and block it out all we want.

    She went for blood, a quick kill. She got it.

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    Hi Michael. I read this last night and again this morning. I loved it. Nerd love.

    Emily's secret shame. So funny. Great title too. The visuals made me laugh...especially the bobble head. And of course the Princess Leia gold bikini.

    Fun idea and fun characters. Just...fun!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Captain Pierce View Post
    Somebody call the Pun Police on DE. Shoot to kill.
    As long as someone appreciates it, El Capitan!


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    Quote Originally Posted by MML View Post
    Hi Michael. I read this last night and again this morning. I loved it. Nerd love.

    Emily's secret shame. So funny. Great title too. The visuals made me laugh...especially the bobble head. And of course the Princess Leia gold bikini.

    Fun idea and fun characters. Just...fun!
    Thanks so much. I enjoyed and commented on your script as well.

    I'm happy that it seems to be hitting home for so many people.

    I've been privy to a few "Stars Colliding" myself.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael Anthony Horrigan View Post
    I've been privy to a few "Stars Colliding" myself.
    Well, I thought it might be significant that your script's protagonist shares your name...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Captain Pierce View Post
    Well, I thought it might be significant that your script's protagonist shares your name...
    Purely a coincidence.



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    Well done! I really enjoyed this script. It's a quick read with fun characters and entertaining dialogue. I can definitely see a Star Trek and Star Wars fan having a conversation like this. Good job!


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    The war between these foes is as old as time itself raging from convention hall to convention hall, truly this is a cry for peace.

    Haha, it was a lot of fun. Good banter, believable characters, focused and it wraps up nicely. Really got a kick out of the bobble-head imagery. Probably one of the best closing lines.


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