Kai and Gerda

[Sarah Daly]

In a dystopian future, a brother and sister face the consequences of their betrayal...

[DarkElastic]

Nice to see you back, Miss Daly.

[Faith Nelson]

Nice to see you again, Sarah! Whatcha been doing?

[Chris_Keaton]

Hey Sarah, nice to see you in the wrong part of town again.

[Sarah Daly]

Aww hey thanks guys!! Just getting back into my groove really - been delving into other creative avenues but think it's time I got some more scripts on the go.

How are you Faith?! Good to electronically see ya

And howdy Chris and DarkElastic - looking forward to your offerings too! Always impressed by your stuff.

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

This should be good.

Best of luck, Sarah.

MAH

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

POSSIBLE SPOILERS


First off....

I'm glad that you didn't try and trick the reader. We all know that these scripts are about betrayal so I'm glad that you got that part out of the way fairly quickly. I was afraid that too many entries might go for the big twist reveal at the end. Nice to see that you went in a different direction. I haven't read many scripts yet so maybe I'm off base on this assumption.

The ending was tough to read and if this ever makes it to the screen it will be very hard to watch. I could see this in my head quite clearly. It was quite haunting. Loved it.

Well done.

MAH

[krestofre]

Awe geeze. Rip my heart out, why don't you?

Excellent job, Sarah, you hit every mark you were aiming for. I loved the dystopian setting, the relationships, the ending. Great job. Emotionally very powerful.

[Charli]

What is it with you Brits? Is it the cold? Is it the rain? Tragedy, ack! Nice
work girl.

[Russell Moore]

Bam! This is an emotional knockout. Really liked this script.

Well written, the characters and their motivations are spot on, you really feel for them.

Depressing, haunting, memorable. Great job Sarah.