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    EDUCATED MOUSE TRAP
    Heed your warnings.

    A college kid explores a strange disk he inherited from his uncle and learns that some things are best left alone.



    Actors: 2 Lead - 1 Supporting - A Couple Extras


    Locations: Front Room - Bathroom


    Pages: 5


    A very doable production.

    Here is the DVXuser Film Fest link.
    http://www.dvxuser.com/V6/showthread...91#post2267191
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    Great to see you in Chris. You're work is always top notch.
    the writer formerly known as "Conlan Forever"

    Need a short script?
    Have an idea? Want to collaborate? Contact me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by conlanforever View Post
    Great to see you in Chris. You're work is always top notch.
    Thanks. I hope we have a good turn out.
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    This is gonna kick some major ash, I can smell it in the tag. Sniff, sniff....
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    Good luck! I look forward to seeing what you've done with this one.


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    Good luck, Chris K...

    It's lucky it is only one entry from each applicant, or you'd have about 15 in!!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by DarkElastic View Post
    Good luck, Chris K...

    It's lucky it is only one entry from each applicant, or you'd have about 15 in!!!
    Yes, I know I'm a whore. I might actually slow down with this free stuff and work on the paying stuff.
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    I liked "a boy's fear" maybe I'll like this one as well :P
    I'm also on Moviepoet under name William Flink,
    Why must I insist on writing my name backwards?

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    Fun script. Seemed a little like your "Devil's Toy" in the sense of a mystical device that makes bad things happen, but it was different enough. Had a nice Twilight Zone feel to it.

    Visually it would be a lot of fun to watch.

    I felt that it dragged just a tad during the montage. Maybe a few too many trips?
    Aside from that I was thoroughly engaged and enjoyed the ride.

    Nice job.

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    I really liked this Chris. I was very intrigued by what was happening to Bill and where he might be going. Very cool idea.

    I wasn't exactly sure why Sticks showed up at the end though. Did Bill's death bring him back to life? Is that what the "trap" was? Or was Sticks seeing Bill because they were both dead? If I'm not the only one confused, maybe that needs to be a bit clearer.

    Nice writing, as usual...and great concept.


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