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    Tag line: Another night of watching Good battle Evil. But tonight the stakes are higher.

    Log line: From his Penthouse suite, Maxwell Cordon watches the Light battle the Dark at the neutral hour, to decide the most important course for the human race.
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    Draft 1 done... A long way to go until I am happy with it though.


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    The script is now in Draft 3. Still not 100% happy with it overall, but I don't have time to create something else, unless a great idea pops into my head sometime soon. I have enough script writing to do from now until mid-September. Hopefully, I will be able to put this through a few more drafts before the comp.


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    Cool tagline but where's the logline?


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    Quote Originally Posted by arroway View Post
    Cool tagline but where's the logline?
    There you go Arroway.


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    So the main character watches or participates in the battle of good and evil?
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    Wait and see...


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    Had Mr Jaffa read through it for me and has given me a good bit of appreciated feedback. Going to move this through a couple more drafts before the deadline, I think.


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    I'm uploaded... Still not excited about this script, but it will do for more useful feedback.
    I will let you guys and gals be the judge and jurers on it.


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    File not found? It looks like your download link is broken.
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