I love this. beautifully visual, emotional, not cliched - Rider is a complex protagonist who is sympathetic despite his misdeeds - his redemption is satisfying. And the little girl is fantastic - so resilient but so tragic - just wonderful characters that we care about and flawless writing throughout. One of my favourites for certain!
Oh i especially loved :
Sprinkling sugar on a turd don't
make it a cake. You ever see a man
reminds you of me, avoid him like
the plague. If he persists after
you, shoot him. I have to go now.
My son of a bitch friend is waiting
for me.
Best last speech I ever heard!
Great job!!!
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04-08-2009 01:15 PM
thank you for your thoughts sarah. i appreciate it.
and LOL @ the thread stars going from 0 to 5 to 3. someone must feel...threatened? i don't know. what a stupid feature. i think i'd feel dirty after down-starring someone's thread, what's the point? the whole system seems childish.
but whoever's doing it, i sincerely hope you win. you're obviously in dire need of an ego boost...
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04-08-2009 02:20 PM
Originally Posted by arroway
thank you for your thoughts sarah. i appreciate it.
and LOL @ the thread stars going from 0 to 5 to 3. someone must feel...threatened? i don't know. what a stupid feature. i think i'd feel dirty after down-starring someone's thread, what's the point? the whole system seems childish.
but whoever's doing it, i sincerely hope you win. you're obviously in dire need of an ego boost...
i agree... it's really silly. lawrie made a good point about that. watch my thread rating go down now too....lol.
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04-08-2009 02:21 PM
Yep - the ratings are a joke anyway - i wouldnt take them seriously - your script mate is one of my favs :P
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04-08-2009 03:37 PM
I'll try to get it back to zero stars for you. LOL.
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04-10-2009 01:38 PM
Congrats Arroway! *scrabbly voice* "there can only be one!" *ahem*
My er... highlander reference... you know, cos im Scottish!
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04-12-2009 07:27 PM
Congrats, I'm happy to say yours was at the top of my list.
Some great work, see you next time.
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