Facing death (Working title)

[arroway]

i love this premise. based on nothing but these preliminary threads, this is the one i'm most looking forward to.

[Tormod]

First draft done. Only 5,5 pages!

[Russell Moore]

Looking forward to it, really like the set up.

[Tormod]

Done a pass on the action lines. Now it`s time to brushen up the dialogue. Hope im getting close to final product soon

[Keth Andril]

I like this idea. Lots of opportunities with this one. Can't wait to read it.

[Tormod]

Done and uploaded! Did some major rewrites from the first draft! Quite happy with it!

[jamiejay]

i can't wait to read this one... sounds great!

jamie

[RodThompson]

I'm a huge fan of conversationalism! I love it. Granted, DeathProof's 45 min coffee shop scene sucked, I think a great story can be told from just a single room and a conversation. I look forward to this read!!!

[krestofre]

Thanks for writing and entering.

***SPOILERS***

My biggest question coming out of this script is: Why was The Man motivated to say that he wasn't going to die? During that section of the script I thought that he knew something that the audience and the Sheriff didn't. Like he had an ace up his sleve, or was supernature in nature or something. Instead he ... died. So what was the character thinking to make that proclamation.

It may sound like a small thing, that that's really the catalyst between these two characters and I just didn't understand it.

[Tormod]

He says he won`t die because he believes that god will somehow save him. then later he realizes that he won`t be saved, but then he hopes for a peaceful death instead

at least that was the idea :P