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    Ten Tumbles and a Boom
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    Senior Member david jerome's Avatar
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    Sometimes you should just go and get a beer.

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    glad you made it


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    Sounds like my kind of script!


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    I like the title, very original. Has a poetic sound to it, or sort of a musical feel. I can picture this being a song title to an old song from the 30's or 40's.

    I look forward to Ten Tumbles and a Boom.


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    Nice kinetic title. Should be a neat read!
    "...and knowing is half the battle. The other half is violence..."


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    ***Spoilers***

    I like the setup and I like the characters. I do wish the ending had a bit more of a payoff. These characters seem very larger than life but they're both killed in an instant and it seems a little disappointing that there wasn't more conflict between them.
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    *SPOILER ALERT*

    slacks man and boots man... gotta love it! great character description. the little things they said and did were perfect... the action and the dialogue were dead on. loved the little rhyme the driver said. almost had a "no country for old men" or "fargo" feel... maybe you should send it to the coen brothers to direct. ;) good job!


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    Really enjoyed it mate - great names, good dialogue, good battle of wits, just a shame there wasn't more of a fight at the end. They both just seem to go up in flames. I am also the only person who doesn't get whats in his case?


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    This is quite an entertaining script, but the first scene is utterly ridiculous lol. Honestly, tell me just honestly, how the heck is a director supposed to find a - oh wait...

    //spoilers//

    How the heck is a director to find a beautiful indian girl (unshaven of course...) to bend over at the start of the film?! I mean thats ridiculous lol at least put down something that a director can shoot. That put me off right away!

    That said its a great and fun little grindhouse style script, what with fiery spectactular deaths and lizard peeing! Please consider still having the raunchy fantasy at the start but with les explicitness as it comes off as a little juvenile at the start - and i know its not the intention as its actually a clever and brilliant action/black comedy script.
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